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In a distant country, there was a boy. He looked after sheep.
But the boy was bored.
One day, he ran to the village. He shouted, "Wolf, wolf. Come and help!"
The people ran to the hill.
But there was no wolf. The people went home.
The next day, the boy was bored again.
He ran to the village and shouted, "Wolf, wolf. Help!"
The people ran to the field. There was no wolf.
The people went home. They were very angry.
Then, a wolf came to the hill.
It wanted to eat the sheep.
The boy ran to the village. But the people didn't run to the hill.
They said, "Don't tell lies."
The wolf ate all the sheep. The boy was very sad.
"Wolves 3," the other There is a butcher Tianwan home, where the burden of the meat has been sold out, leaving only some of the bones. Two wolves encounter on the road, followed closely by Zoulehenyuan. Afraid of the butcher, pick up a piece of bone thrown in the past. A wolf bones have been stopped, along with still another wolf. Butcher and pick up a piece of bone thrown in the past, the bones after the wolf came to a halt, but the bones have been the first wolf Yougen up. Bones have been thrown over, the o together, like the original as a wolf to catch up. Butcher is distress, I am afraid together before and after the attack by a wolf. There are wild to see Michael playing a game, the masters of the field to stack firewood in the wheat field to fight, into a hill-like coverage. So Ben butcher in the past to rely on firewood pile below, pick up the butcher's knife to lay down their burden. Two wolves are afraid to move on and stare toward the butcher. After a while, a wolf straight away and the other as a wolf-like dog in front of the squat. A long time, it seems to be a wolf's eyes closed, looking very relaxed. Butcher all of a sudden jump, with a wolf's head Daopi, Liankanjidao to kill wolves. Butcher about to start now, to firewood behind a pile, saw another wolf is firewood heap holes, drilled in the past want to butcher in the back of the attack. The wolf has got half of the body, only the buttocks and tail exposed. From the butcher cut off the back of the hind legs of the wolf, the wolf kill. Understand this in front of the wolf pretending to sleep, was used to lure the enemy. Wolf is too cunning, but for a while o wolves have been hacked to death, the animal deception to how much? Only give them increased humor. 《狼·三则》其二 有个屠户天晚回家，担子里的肉已经卖完了，只剩下一些骨头。
路上遇到两只狼，紧随着走了很远。 屠户害怕了，拿起一块骨头扔过去。
一只狼得到骨头停下了，另一只狼仍然跟着。屠户又拿起一块骨头扔过去，后得到骨头的那只狼停下了，可是先得到骨头的那只狼又跟上来。
骨头已经扔完了，两只狼像原来一样一起追赶。 屠户很窘迫，恐怕前后一起受到狼的攻击。
看见野地里有一个打麦场，场主人把柴草堆在打麦场里，覆盖成小山似的。屠户于是奔过去倚靠在柴草堆下面，放下担子拿起屠刀。
两只狼都不敢向前，瞪眼朝着屠户。 过了一会儿，一只狼径直走开，另一只狼像狗似的蹲坐在前面。
时间长了，那只狼的眼睛似乎闭上了，神情悠闲得很。屠户突然跳起来，用刀劈狼的脑袋，又连砍几刀把狼杀死。
屠户正要上路，转到柴草堆后面一看，只见另一只狼正在柴草堆里打洞，想要钻过去从背后对屠户进行攻击。狼的身子已经钻进一半，只有 *** 和尾巴露在外面。
屠户从后面砍断了狼的后腿，也把狼杀死。这才明白前面的那只狼假装睡觉，原来是用来诱惑敌方的。
狼也太狡猾了，可是一会儿两只狼都被砍死，禽兽的欺骗手段能有多少呢？只不过给人增加笑料罢了。
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The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac jumped off his bicycle and rushed to the door of the car. But before Mac could open the door, the wolf had caught up and jumped to attack. Luckily, the magic spray saved Mac a third time. Seeing the wolf back off, Paul quickly unlocked the door, and the frightened man climbed into the car in no time, shutting the door behind him heavily. Becky looked out of the back window and saw the wolf standing over Mac’s bicycle as if it were a kill. Soon after, the animal ran off.
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A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. Mac got out of the car and hugged his friends. “It was really a nightmare and I thought I was going to die,” said Mac in a shaky voice, tears gathering in his eyes. For him, life could never be more beautiful. After saying goodbye to Paul and Becky with gratitude, the three men continued their trip, agreeing never to separate again.
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase (追赶).
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
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After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. Inside the bag was a chicken taco. The next few minutes saw my wolfing down the delicious food. Tears welled up as I was chewing. It was awesome to know that while many people tend to ignore those in need, there are some kind-hearted ones who go out of their way to lend a hand. The good deed the foreign family did will never escape me. I am going to pass it down to create a much friendlier world. （163）
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 . The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jema found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jef to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear！The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
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I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.
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The pay day arrived at last. I was glad that I finally got the payment after working hard for two weeks. While walking back home with an excited mind. I conceived many plans about how to dispose of it. I needed a new football because the old one we played had already worn out. I intended to purchase my favorite chocolates. Upon approaching the house, I noticed my dad and mom standing beside the old truck, looking sadly. It seemed as if something unpleasant happened. “How much do we still need to pay for a new truck?". asked my mother. Three hundred dollars, but we just had two hundred left.”
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I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. Really, the truck my dad drove often broke down on the way, which made my dad in trouble. My parents had intended to buy a new truck but couldn't afford it. Suddenly, I realized what I should do. Stepping forward, I said, “Dad, here is what I received for my work. I think it would help you a little.” A little surprised at what I said, my mom hugged me tightly. That night, before I went to bed, l thought I would tell the farmer the next day that I would continue my work, after all l grew up.
A wolf had been badly wounded by lay sick and maimed in his lair. He felt very hungry and thirsty.
When a sheep passed by, he asked him to fetch some water from the stream. “If you bring me the water,” he said, “I will find means to get some food. ”
“Yes, ”said the sheep, “If I bring you water,you would become my food without doubt.”
狼被狗所咬，伤势很严重。他卧病在床，在巢穴里苟延残喘。他感到又饿又渴。
一只羊路过，他便请求羊到附近的小河里为他取一点水来。“你给我一点水解渴，” 他说，“我就能想出办法去获取食物了。”
“是呀，”羊回答说，“如果我给你送水喝，那么毫无疑问我就会成为你的食物。”
"Mr Dongguo and the Wolf'is an interesting fable that l have fable said,one day a wolf asked Mr Dongguo,a soft-hearted man,to help him,because a hunter was running after him and wanted to kill Dongguo hid the wolf in a bag and told the hunter he saw the hunter left,Mr Dongguo set the wolf wolf,however,returned good for told Mr Dongguo that he was hun-gry,and he was going to eat Mr Dongguo clever man came by and asked the wolf,“The bag is very small and you are very can you get into the bag?"The wolf wanted to show the bag was big enough for him,so he got into it at two men tied the bag up immediately and killed the wolf.
The story shows that people should learn to tell evil from good.
《东郭先生和狼》是我读过的一篇很有意思的寓言。寓言上讲：有一天，一只狼向心地善良的东郭先生请求帮助。 因为有一位猎人正在后面追捕他,而且想杀死他。 于是,东郭先生就让狼钻进了二个袋子并告诉猎人他什么也没有看见。 等猎人离开后，东郭先生放出了狼。 但是，狼恢复了他本来的凶残面目，他对东郭先生说，他现在很饿，要吃了东郭先生。幸运的是，一位聪明的人经过此地，他对狼说：“口袋这么小”，你的身体是那么大，怎么可能钻进去呢?“狼想展示袋子大的足够装下他，于是再次钻了进去。这两个人马上扎紧了口袋并杀死了狼。
这个故事告诉人们应该学会辨明真伪。
保护狼 Protecting the wolves 在人们眼里，狼似乎是种很可怕的动物，但其实，每种动物的存在都为生态平衡做出了自己的贡献~现在狼也存在捕杀严重的问题~我们应该呼吁保护狼~ Animals are people's friends so weshould Protect them. Wolves look like they have sharp can help with each eats snail and they have very good eyesight,hearing and *** ell,they never attack people. If hunters catch wolve,they will kill it for its fur and sharp famers cut down trees and forests,wolves will have nowhere to they have no food to we should to protect what can we do?We can take the following actions to protect wolves:we can plant many trees,encourage famers to leaves the wolves,then we can write to newspapers and magazines about the think many people do not understand the importance of the hope this imformation will help them understand and make them actively take actions to protect wolves If we do nothing,soon there will be no wolves in the world!。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.
With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom! "she cried. "Help!"
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
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The wolf originated in the new world, about five million years ago. In human flourishing, the wolfwas the world's most widely distributed wild animal. Widely distributed in Europe, Asia, the Americas, the wolf records in North America alone has reached 23. In the Western folk legend,the wolf is often described as the lazy cheats and animal. In fact, the wolf family life than mosthumans, they are more loyal and conscientious. This seemingly cunning creatures are on the verge of extinction, let us protect them.。
到目前为止，已经有许多省份在高考英语中开始了对读后续写的考查。下面我们以20_年6月浙江省高考真题为例，一起来分析一下读后续写的考查重点。
阅读下面的短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase (追赶).
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
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1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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The car abruptly stopped in front of him.
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Afewminuteslater,the other two cyclists arrived.
从20_年浙江省高考真题中我们可以发现，读后续写的考试形式与教育部考试中心颁布的《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明》（高考综合改革试验省份试用）中的描述相同，提供了一段350词以内的语言材料（体裁多以记叙文为主），故事没有结束但是留有线索，让考生得以缘写文章。题目要求考生根据已经给出的故事信息，结合已经写好的两个开头语，应用材料中5个以上标有下划线的关键词语，完成一篇约150词的作文（150词不包括已给出的两段的开头语）。
读后续写不是让考生毫无依据地编故事，而是要求考生在读懂原文的基础上，找到原文给出的线索，然后用丰富、准确的语言完成一篇与原文紧密结合的读后续写作文。总体来说，
Wolf is a highly gregarious pack of wolves around the number between 5-12 in the winter when the cold up to 40 or so,usually in family units,a family wolf by a pair of dual leadership strengths,but with others call for a group of brothers and sisters Wolf led the strongest are territorial,and usually are also the scope of their activities,if the increase in the number of inpiduals within populations,to narrow the scope of the do not overlap between the scope of the field,will be howling sound of the scope of the other groups Wolf to grow,it will remain in the group taking care of younger siblings,it may inherit the dominant position within the group,and some will be moved out of (mostly male wolf) while there are some cases,migratory wolves will appear,to a group of 100 progenitor,from different family levels of various types of wolves,each small group will become the first former head of the wolf wolf wolf of the most outstanding will become a long wolves generally live 12 - 16 years,and some wolves in captivity can live up to twenty fast,up to 55 kilometers or so,durability is also have the ability to speed of 10 km / h (6 miles) long run,and are able to up to nearly 65 km / h speed (40 miles) hunted with hounds it is long-distance running,it will exceed the speed of high,you can smell,sounds to wolf is a meat-based omnivorous animals,is the food chain in a very critical one.。
My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn't understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.
I didn't really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and l thought that I would surpass（超过） anything he had accomplished by the time l walked across the stage at high school graduation.
Summers in the mid, 70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone（长号）.
The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and painted at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb's-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to.
At home, my dad said, "A job's a big step to growing up. I'm glad you will be contributing to the household." My dad's words made me realize that my earning might not be mine to do with as wished.
My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn't interested. I decided it was not fair that l had to contribute my money.
The wolf is at the top of the pyramid of biological life forms,in many play an important role in the food chain,they share some of their biological systems bio-energy minimum,but the role it can not be ignored.
We have to protect wolves,because if we kill wolves,it would damaged the ecological like the energy pyramid,if the primary consumers died off,the secondary and territary consumers would all die,also.
"Everybody knows sympathy pathetic sheep sheep, who knows the lonely wolf, wolf sad sheep can graze hungry, hungry wolves should starve you"? I do not remember this sentence is the one who says celebrity, I just remember these words, remember that the reason is because it demonstrated to the resent, I seem to have heard the cries of injustice faced with all the world ------- I love wolves, wolf worship, perhaps because I was a dog, and the wolf is a close relative of the reason, it is in my mind totem. I collected a lot of wolf pictures, puzzles, pictures, novels, but also a collection of some of the velvet cloth, ceramic, clay modeling wolf, and related video and so on. I like the wolf personality. Dogs and wolves are close relatives, dogs bee fed pet wolf bee constantly guard, brought frighten children encounter certainly kill the evil beasts. More "East Guo and wolf" idioms and vocabulary of a class act in collusion. In human eyes, because the wolf is insidious, cunning, cruel, dangerous symbol. Wag obedience to humans pared with dogs, wolves'm stubborn before God and said: our souls and humans are equal. Wolf humans said firmly: No! Because wolves sought "equal soul" because of its humanity said "no"! So it was killing people and demonize. I have some stubborn in nature and firm, I acted not so obedient *** ooth, I often self-righteous people would say: No! So inevitably the same fate with the wolves more hardships and frustrations. People in this world, no matter how his character, more fiving surface, virtually no one likes what others say "no." Although older, character some change, but my heart still uphold my integrity and perseverance. I like the wolf tenacious. Because humans can not, the wolf has to survive in harsh environments. It has a harsh natural environment and a strong ability to adapt and survive. Nature does not change, do not change Chixin efforts to survive and reproduce sound. We pursue a career in the pursuit of the ideal process, most of the time is in trouble struggle, struggle, struggle, which is bound to go through the process successful. In times of hardship we may wish to wolves to learn from its tenacious. I like the wolf simple dedication. We imagine that, in the vast dry desert, a wolf track a person. People in order to escape the exhaustion of all the strength and energy, with a strong desire to live and fear trek forward, my mind will occasionally thought of his parents, brother, wife, kids, a warm home and feasting city. Wolf tracks with which people, it is only an idea, what people eat. Wolf nobody thought much, but nobody's concern, therefore the wolf out of the desert, but few people out of the desert. I like the wolf alert. In line to see such an old hunter tell stories. "A she-wolf with a coyote crossing the river, how to do it? If only a coyote, she put him in his mouth. If several only, she do not trust one with only the past, afraid of their own in the river swim when children stay on the shore would happen, so the wolf killed by an animal, that animal's stomach to blow enough air, and then the teeth firmly stationed at the pedicle, let him plump like a raft, she put all the coyotes bear on the body, by that life buoy buoyancy, the family across the river. Once I hunt with o dear baby of a she-wolf, she ran fast, because coyotes are not healthy leg muscles. Distance beeen me and the wolf gradually shortened, wolf mother turned to a huge sand dune climbing. I was surprised when the wolf is usually critical, lush place in circles, by the plex terrain, waiting to escape, if climbed Sharper, although wolf climb faster than people seem to take advantage of, but who once climbed the hill, on the List demonstrated, the wolf will no longer stand it. This is a strange wolf, maybe she got dizzy. I thought, a slide-step climb up the tall dunes. Really see clearly, quickly fled the wolf in the distance. I downhill chase, suddenly found coyotes disappeared, then gave more thought, desperately chase down. That is the fastest I have ever see the wolf, I do not know where she was ing from so much effort, as close to the land of a black arrow. Catch the sun goes down, it will kill her. I took to kill the wolves go back. Walked think, is really an incredible wolf, why she is so taboo it? That o coyotes go out? I suddenly saw a hidden depression, like a white candle as leisurely o *** oke rising. I ran over and saw a lot of dried camel dung, from which white gas are ing out. I gently clawed camel dung, disappeared during the day to see the o coyotes, panting under uniform is warm camel dung. Wolf tail gently sweep the ground with traces of dry very 。
with all her big brothers and sisters off to school， our ranch became a lonely place for our three-year-old daughter， becky。 she longed for playmates。 cattle and horses were too big to cuddle and farm machinery dangerous for a child so small。 we promised to buy her a puppy but in the meantime， “pretend” puppies popped up nearly every day。
i had just finished washing the lunch dishes when the screen door slammed and becky rushed in， cheeks flushed with excitement。 “mama!” she cried， “come see my new doggy! i gave him water two times already。 he’s so thirsty!”
i sighed， another of becky’s imaginary dogs。
哥哥姐姐都去上学以后，对我们三岁的女儿贝基来说，农场就成为一个寂寞的地方了。她渴望伙伴。牛马太大了，她无法抱在怀里。农业机械对这么小的孩子也太危险。我们答应给她买个宠物，不过同时，“虚构”的宠物每天都会出现。
我刚洗完午饭的盘子，纱窗门就砰地被撞开，贝基跑了进来，兴奋地满脸通红。“妈妈!”她叫着，“快来看看我的新狗狗!我已经喂他两次水了，他都快渴死了!”
我叹息了一声，又是一只贝基虚构的小狗。
“please come， mama。” she tugged at my jeans， her brown eyes pleading， “he’s crying — and he can’t walk!”
“can’t walk?” now that was a twist。 all her previous make-believe dogs could do marvelous things。 one balanced a ball on the end of its nose。 another dug a hole that went all the way through the earth and fell out on a star on the other side。
still another danced on a tightrope。 why suddenly a dog that couldn’t walk?
“all right， honey，” i said。 by the time i tried to follow her， becky had already disappeared into the mesquite。
“where are you?” i called。
“over here by the oak stump。 hurry， mama!”
“来呀，妈妈。”她使劲拖着我的牛仔裤，棕色的眼睛里透出乞求的眼神。“他一直在叫——他还不会走路呢!”
“不会走路?”这倒是一个预想不到的变化。她以前编造的狗狗都会做令人惊异的事情。其中一只会在鼻尖上平稳地顶着一个球不让它掉下来，另一只挖洞穿越了地球，从另一端掉到星球上去了，还有一只在能在钢丝上跳舞。怎么突然有了一只不会走路的.狗狗呢?
“好吧，宝贝。”我说。还来不及跟上她呢，贝基就已经消失在豆科灌木丛中了。
“你在哪儿啊?”我喊道。
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. It was a fantastic trip. We crossed big rivers and vast plains, climbed high mountains, and overlooked deep valleys. During the trip,Mom’s being absent-minded not only got us into much trouble, but also gave us many funny moments. But luckily, she was not so forgetful as to leave me and David behind in the gas station bathrooms. We all arrived at grandparents’ home safe and sound. (续写词数147)
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. To our delight,Mom gave up the idea of camping in some stranger’s backyard. Instead, we found a wonderful camping site in the wild. It was a clearing in the woods by a small lake, where Dad could catch some fish for dinner. We had no trouble setting up our tent, but we were disappointed to find that Mom forgot to pack up pillows. Needless to say, we all woke up with a sore neck the next morning.
在进行读后续写时有以下几点需要考生注意∶
①重在描述
读后续写的重点在于情节描述。描述过程中应加入更多的具体动作和情感描写，用具体动作代模地名表达。同学们往往比较擅长写"结论性"语言，例如"S…"样的句子虽然在语法上没有错误，但是且按用形容词来表达会导致续写只呈现抽象的结论，而没有"画面械"、不会给读者留下深刻的印象。所以，同"们在进行读后续写时，一定要注重描述，讲究生动和画面感。本书第二章中为大家提供了一些用来描述情绪和动作的高频词（短语），希望大家能学以致用。
②关注语言
在高考英语写作中，考生所采用的句型结构在一定程度上会影响阅卷老师对考生写作水平的判断。考生尤其应该避免句型单一化、如通篇使用定语从句，因为这样会让阅卷老师觉得考生对各种句型掌握得不够充分。考生在进行读后续写时应该有意识地多使用不同的句型结构和语法点，比如非谓语、形容词作状语、虚拟语气等。本书第三章中对这些相关语法点进行了讲解。
③注意衔接
由于阅卷老师的阅卷时间十分有限，所以考生一定要在作文中使用清晰的逻辑衔接词，这样可以帮助老师快速抓住文章结构，促使老师更好地理解文章主旨，同时也可以显示出考生写作时严谨的逻辑。在读后续写当中，时间线索串联最为重要，例如uponone'sarrival、then、however、besides、while等衔接词，能够为文章提供明确的时间线索，很好地承接上下文，同学们在日常学习中应该多多积累。
④正向结局
对于读后续写这样的写作题型，同学们平时一定要多积累好词好句，进行大量的句子翻译练习，并且找到合适的写作步骤，这样才能在考场上有限的时间内完成一篇高分作文。
A wolf was almost dead with hunger. A house-dog saw him, and asked, "Friend, your irregular life will soon ruin you."Why don't you work steadily as I do, and get your food regularly?"一只狼快要饿死了，一只狗看见后问他：“你现在的无规律的生活一定会毁掉你，为什么不像我一样稳定地干活并有规律地获得食物呢?”
"I would have no objection," said the wolf, "if I could only get a place." "I will help you," said the dog. "Come with me to my master, and you shall share my work."狼说：“如果我有个地方住，我没有意见。”狗回答说：“跟我到主人那里去，我们一起工作。”
So the wolf and the dog went to the town together.于是狼和狗一起回到了村子。
On the way the wolf saw that there was no hair around the dog's felt quite surprised, and asked him why it was like that?在路上，狼注意到狗的脖子上有一圈没有毛，他很奇怪地问为什么会那样。
"Oh, it is nothing," said the dog. "Every night my master puts a collar around my neck and chains me up. You will soon get used to it."“噢，没有什么，”狗说，“我的主人每天晚上都用一条铁链子拴住我，你很快就会习惯的。”
"Is that the only reason?" said the wolf. "Then good-bye to you, my friend. I would rather be free."“就是因为这个原因吗?”狼说道，“那么，再见了，我的朋友，我宁愿选择自由。”
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. One day, towards evening, we found a great camping site at the foot of a high mountain. David and I helped Dad put up the tent, and Mom was busy preparing supper. When the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountains, the tent was set up and the meal was ready. Sitting around the camp fire, we talked and laughed. Every time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey a pleasant smile would spread over Mom’s face. (续写词数163)
When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. I shook my head and said no, wondering why she asked such a question — was she going to treat me to lunch or something? “Wait a minute,” said the girl, and then she went back to the truck. After a few minutes she came back with a paper bag. “Here are some Mexican snacks and you can have some when you are hungry,” the girl smiled. I was so surprised and touched that words almost failed me. I just said a “WOW!” instead of a “Thank you!” when I took the bag.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.
Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.
One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy — his name was Bernard — had interested her very much.
“I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don’t see what he can do.”
After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.”
“So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.”
For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish (完成) .”
The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. “I tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn (爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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